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Re: "I am not Jerry!"
Note: "Weely" is just the adverbial form of "wee"
Sep 28 -
Re: Our Clumsy Sunshine
Hey there Tika, thanks a lot for the reviews! This poem and "Bathing in the Stars" are just tributes to my newfound university friends. They are indeed about real people, ...
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Re: Our Clumsy Sunshine
Thanks for the praise, Queenie! She is indeed wonderful
Sep 18 -
Re: The Forest of Wisdom
Hey there bambi, thanks for the review. I did change 'pondering' to 'ruminating' and the second 'binding' to 'steering'. 'Self' and 'itself' is intentional so I won't change that, and ...
Sep 4 -
Re: A Day in College
Hey there, thanks for your review! College experience can be different for everyone, but the new experiences can be fun -- coming from a fellow university beginner. About the rhythm, ...
Aug 28 -
Re: Death and Destruction [Ch. V, Nine]
Hey there 4rev, thanks a lot for your review! I am glad that you liked the chapter in general, although I do agree that many chapters have a lot of ...
Aug 17 -
Re: Man, Machine, and Madness [Ch. XXIII, Nine]
I mean, that's nothing new tbh XD
Aug 14 -
Re: Man, Machine, and Madness [Ch. XXIII, Nine]
Some questions for reviewers: Q1. There are a lot of places where I did a lot of hand-holding in this chapter because I felt the chapter in general might be ...
Aug 14 -
Re: Man, Machine, and Madness [Ch. XXIII, Nine]
Yo, Tika, I have some questions for you this time as well, and some answers: Q1. Was this the most Nine chapter to have ever Nine'd out of all the ...
Aug 14 -
Re: Man, Machine, and Madness [Ch. XXIII, Nine]
Bet
Aug 13 -
Re: Man, Machine, and Madness [Ch. XXIII, Nine]
Genuinely, this chapter is the most Nine chapter to have ever Nine'd
Aug 13 -
Re: Underwater
Hey, I know it's a bit of a hassle once you have already written the kanji/hiragana, but it would be great if you could also post the romaji by editing ...
Aug 10 -
Re: The Pursuit of Happiness
This is just a rap and a midnight miscellany, no need to think too hard about it, just read it and try to rap it if you want to! Though ...
Aug 3 -
Re: The Kudryavka Sequence [Ch. XXII, Nine]
Author's Note and Disclaimer: Most of this chapter was made while having a severe headache and a bad fever, so suggestions and revision advice is appreciated wherever necessary. Edit: Halfway ...
Aug 2 -
Re: A Little Bit of Everything (By Lavender)
I am glad that you liked the poem, Alex! 😁
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