Peeping through the branches,
Peering through the pine,
She smiles, laughs and prances --
Our clumsy sunshine.
She drops things and stumbles,
Forgets the dance routine;
She struts about and bumbles --
Our clumsy little queen.
She beams through the windowsills,
Churning delight from boredom;
She careens through sobs and chills,
Our clumsy quirky humdum.
She breathes kindness into the heart,
Filling the air with compassion;
She helps, she yelps, plays every part,
Our clumsy queen of passion.
Wherever she goes or whatever she does,
Grace and glee and whimsy entwine;
She is so kind and cute. Why? Well, 'cuz,
She's our clumsy little sunshine.
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First of all, great poem about a little clumsy cutie!!!
I wonder who this is about?
I really loved these parts:
Such a darling, whoever this is written about,
These parts really describe the little one's character, and it also reminds me of my little 3-year-old brother.
Wonderful , great poem overall
Love,
Queenie
Thanks for the praise, Queenie! She is indeed wonderful