ThePhoenix

I THINK I MAY HAVE FINALLY FOUND A GOOD WAY TO TRANSITION TO THE REVIEW! No one cares... Shut up... Just as a side note, I'd like to say that ...

HELLO! Review time. I still need a way to transition to the review... I listened as the new assignments heavily smacked against the table. I suggest you rephrase this. Saying ...

... D: It's been a year and you still haven't done chapter two... Unless you gave up on it. In which case. NOOOOOOO! But I'll review it anyway. The creak ...

Ok, ok. Never done horror before. I CAN DO THIS! A hot steamy shower helps a lot after a long day. Especially when you live by yourself. Ehm, I don't ...

*Sees rating ... Pshhhh. Who do you take me for? Some sort of rule obeying kid? Ok I am kinda like that. But psh. Anyway. Review time. ... Ok, I'll ...

I DON'T CARE THAT TWO PEOPLE HAVE ALREADY REVIEWED! THIS IS A PERCY JACKSON FANFIC AND I WILL REVIEW IT! As you can already tell. I LOVE PERCY JACKSON! And ...

Wut... NOOOOOOOO! YOU HAVEN'T EVEN GOTTEN UP TO THE SUPERNATURAL/EPIC ACTION PART YET! NOOOOO! I NEED MORE! Anyway... REVIEW! Heads up! I'm relatively new here so if this review ABSOLUTELY ...

HELLO! I'm bored. REVIEW TIME! But lunch first. NOW REVIEW. Now let me just say. I was literally SHAKING WITH EXCITEMENT when I saw (well, read) the Doctor in this ...

... I relate to this so much. I'm not even kidding. I mean, not the cutting. I'm too much of a coward for that. But the feeling that no one ...

I haven't even read this whole thing yet. AND I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH YOU ALREADY! Luckily (and I'm actually proud of myself for this) I am NOT one of those ...

I haven't even read the whole thing yet. And I already think you're a better writer than I am. :D Though I will say you missed a couple of spaces. ...

Hm. Very... interesting. Maybe this is why people don't hang around you... Shut up... Continuing on. You should also know he is VERY socially awkward. ...Did I not tell you ...

Aha, that twist at the end. I so saw that coming... Totally. *Whispers* No I didn't. But there was one thing that annoyed me. Only one thing (ok maybe there ...

*Turns off music so reviewing is not constantly interrupted by me dancing or lip synching to the songs...* ...FOB FOR LIFE. Or MCR. Or P!ATD. Or Paramore. Or Blink 182. ...

Hi. This was an interesting chapter and I really liked it. Of course, everything and everyone has flaws. Although there's probably more than what I will point out, this is ...