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  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: i am ill.

    Greetings fleurelplants :) As a thank for reviewing our chapter part, we have come to review your work So, our normal format for reviewing poetry is vocabulary -> Grammar/Syntax -> ...

    Sep 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Ch. 2) Alice

    Salutations Rosewood! We're back with another review of this novel of yours :) Anyway, off we go with this (relatively, by our usual standards at least) review! (in the usual ...

    Sep 27, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Byzantine music

    Ave Buranko! We were just strolling through the Green Room, when this poem popped up (actually just refreshed the Green Room a couple times, but let us dream) Being a ...

    Sep 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Ch. 1) Alice

    Good day Rosewood! We were just taking a pilgrimage through the Green room, and then we saw you posted the first chapter to that prologue of yours we reviewed, so ...

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Blood Sisters (Prologue) Jose

    Hey Rosewood! You did us the kindness of reviewing the first part of our prologue, so we thought we'd return the favour ;-) So, we usually follow a Vocabulary->Grammar/Syntax->Interpretation format ...

    Sep 18, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Health Re: Chapters Alight

    Hey Lady Gemstone! So we managed to find a way back into our old account, thus we say be reviewing from here now and no longer from the TheGreekGeek :D ...

    Sep 2, 2020
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Stars and Galaxies

    Bonjour felistia! I have come to grace you with this review :P Can I just say that this is quite remarkable! Usually I go on a rant about insufficient imagery, ...

    Mar 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: To Live in This Moment

    Bonjour, tgirly! I have come to review this short poem of yours! Okay, so let's jump right in, shall we? When I saw this was marked as a lyrical poem, ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Shades of Blue

    I guess I should come out of my hibernation and start reviewing again, and this seems like a good piece to kick start my reviews with! Congratulations @ScarletARose for being ...

    Mar 9, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Witch Treats

    Hey Iggy!! Your favorite senile old wizard here for a quick review. ;-) My my, wasn't this fun to read! Your descriptions of the candy made me start picturing it ...

    Dec 14, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: i will bleed you white

    Hey Deanie!! Here for a quick review in between Finals studywork... One word: WOW!!! I love this poem! I mean, this poem is, well... It is extraordinary! The alliteration in ...

    Oct 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Deleted 61

    Hey there Lumi! Since this poem has been in here for a while (two days, but still) I thought I'd give a quick commentary on why this is one of ...

    Oct 19, 2015
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Ten Reasons Why Nate is Afraid of Storybooks

    Finally a Ten reasons (or actually 6 reasons...) I can talk about! Hello Artemis, and today is your lucky day, for Cratos has come from Tartarus to review your work!! ...

    Oct 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: Apparition: The Game - Ch. 2.1

    Hey SpiritedWolfe! The Air Nomads have come to save this piece from the clutches of the Green Room. Now, right off the bat I want to mention that I haven't ...

    Jul 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: oculus reparo

    Hey there disillusioned! Firstly, welcome to our wonderful realm of writers known to all as YWS. I hope you enjoy every moment of your time with us, and that you ...

    Jun 10, 2015


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