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TheOneNamedZoe

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: A Loyal Friend

    Feb 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter one

    Thank you very much for the review!

    Nov 14, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter Five

    Thank you! And also... Heheh. I'm too used to making comics from good ol times ;^^

    Nov 8, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Thank you for your review, but it was rather confusing You say that the creation of the worlds didn't seem important, then later in the review you explain that the ...

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Thank you for your review! If you were to look into previous reviews a lot of them mentioned there was too little info. Because of this, editing the prologue may ...

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter Five

    Surprisingly enough, the thought process of destroying the book is mentioned in previous chapters. (Chapter 2) Solex has gone through a lot in this chapter and previous chapters, and is ...

    Oct 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    Oh and earth is the perfect

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prologue

    This information doesn't exactly 100% matter. The main characters and the fact that there are two worlds is the only jist needed. The prologue, as I've heard from others, should ...

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter Four

    Reading that over, I think I'll remove that line of dialogue. Thanks!

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter Four

    Thank you for your review! Xelos has hardly any confidence throughout the whole entire story. So this little sliver of confidence he shows is a bit shocking and even considerably ...

    Oct 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Horror Re: Ashen Faced

    Ooh, never thought of it that way!

    Oct 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Three

    Read the other chapters and a lot will Make sense. There is too much I have to explain as to why said characters do this. And Why Solex is a ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Chapter one

    1.) Xaos and Mariko made Solex and Xelos from their will, They are demigods. The humans were made from quasars. Solex and Xelos are meant to act rather humanly. 2.) ...

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Three

    Thank you for the review! If you liked it, please feel free to read the others!

    Sep 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Chapter Two

    Hey, mage! I finished chapter three if you wish to see it!

    Sep 24, 2016


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