- Re: A Loyal Friend Feb 11, 2017
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Re: Chapter one
Thank you very much for the review!
Nov 14, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Five
Thank you! And also... Heheh. I'm too used to making comics from good ol times ;^^
Nov 8, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you for your review, but it was rather confusing You say that the creation of the worlds didn't seem important, then later in the review you explain that the ...
Oct 31, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Thank you for your review! If you were to look into previous reviews a lot of them mentioned there was too little info. Because of this, editing the prologue may ...
Oct 31, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Five
Surprisingly enough, the thought process of destroying the book is mentioned in previous chapters. (Chapter 2) Solex has gone through a lot in this chapter and previous chapters, and is ...
Oct 31, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Oh and earth is the perfect
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
This information doesn't exactly 100% matter. The main characters and the fact that there are two worlds is the only jist needed. The prologue, as I've heard from others, should ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Four
Reading that over, I think I'll remove that line of dialogue. Thanks!
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Four
Thank you for your review! Xelos has hardly any confidence throughout the whole entire story. So this little sliver of confidence he shows is a bit shocking and even considerably ...
Oct 2, 2016 -
Re: Ashen Faced
Ooh, never thought of it that way!
Oct 1, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Three
Read the other chapters and a lot will Make sense. There is too much I have to explain as to why said characters do this. And Why Solex is a ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Chapter one
1.) Xaos and Mariko made Solex and Xelos from their will, They are demigods. The humans were made from quasars. Solex and Xelos are meant to act rather humanly. 2.) ...
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Three
Thank you for the review! If you liked it, please feel free to read the others!
Sep 25, 2016 -
Re: Chapter Two
Hey, mage! I finished chapter three if you wish to see it!
Sep 24, 2016
