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Re: CAPS LOCK
This is awesome, I'm seconding the short and sweet. Also, on a random side note, just from seeing the title before I'd read the actual poem, I feel like it ...
Aug 3, 2025 -
Re: Alfendanse
I'm glad you enjoyed this so much! It seems like I've got the atmosphere I was trying to convey across. And as for Tolkien it is partly inspired by a ...
Jul 25, 2025 -
Re: Upon Wide Seas - A shanty
Hello HildegardHope, thanks for your review! You definitely pointed out the main flaw of the song, I think I may play around with the formatting about and see if that ...
May 13, 2025 -
Re: Fionnuala
This is a really cool poem! Did you make up the irish lyrics yourself or are they form an old song? I like Celtic mythology, and languages, so this was ...
May 5, 2025 -
Re: Grove Ch. 1
Hello! This is quite a vivid chapter you've put together, and it builds tension well, beginning with Lily's annoyance at Iris, andoving into Talyn and Hyancinth's intriguing news. Speaking of ...
May 4, 2025 -
Re: Two Po-ems
I'm so glad you liked my little poems! It's interesting that you noted the first has a lot of interpretations, I guess I didn't realise that. It's supposed to be ...
Dec 24, 2024 -
Re: holidays
This is a really lovely poem! I love all the creativity in the symbols and things, they're very fun. My favorite was the "mi_sing wings"
Dec 8, 2024 -
Re: The Lost System Chapter 1: An Evening Disrupted
Hello Rebel, thanks for the review! I appreciate how honest you were, I definitely need to work on pacing, and as for the grammer stuff, I%u2019ve only lightly proofread this ...
Jun 26, 2024 -
Re: The Lost System Chapter 1: An Evening Disrupted
Helloo thanks so much for the review. Wow I did not realise Aster came off as such a jerk... I intentionally made him worse than in the first draft because, ...
Jun 23, 2024 -
Re: The Lost System Chapter 1: An Evening Disrupted
Question for people reading or reviewing: most of the chapters are about as long as this one, or often even longer, would it be easier if I split them up ...
Jun 21, 2024 -
Re: A Bet on Flying Fish
So, first of all, thanks for the review, it means a lot. However, I'm not entirely sure how to say this, but, the quotes you've put, aren't from my story? ...
Jun 11, 2024 -
Re: The Undoing of Cornelius Bottle
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And in particular I was going for a fairy-tale/Hobbit feel so I'm really glad that worked out. And thanks for your comments about the ...
Mar 9, 2024 -
Re: The Undoing of Cornelius Bottle
I'm glad you liked it.
Mar 3, 2024 -
Re: The Comedi-hen
*claps and nods assuredly*
Feb 5, 2023 -
Re: Robin Hood & The Silver Pistol
Since it's so long I've seperated it into three parts, feel free to review only one part, or the whole thing.
Oct 27, 2022