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Re: The Legend of Atlantis
Hi Myth here to review for you! Once, long ago, before magic was legend, there lived a village by the sea. No fishing happened in this village, there was no ...
May 25, 2021 -
Re: the damage i've done
Myth here to review for you, ok first off, I'm only reviewing one of the poems (I wish I was more like you) to leave room for others to do ...
May 20, 2021 -
Re: stuck in the hanger
oook super sad, very true though (of how being scared of messing up can stop you from doing somethiing you should) its an ok poem doesn't really roll of the ...
May 5, 2021 -
Re: Before The Dragon - Chapter 29.1
Moi here to review for you. right to start off the beginning was well done, not super interesting but well done all the same. also something I noticed while reading ...
May 3, 2021 -
Re: When Santa Forgot My Gift
Moi here to give u a review. right, so overall I really liked this, it genuinely sounds like a little kid whose hope in Santa is shattered, because they asked ...
May 3, 2021 -
Re: Act 1(The badminton field)
Ok right from the first few lines I can tell this is going to be funny, well done on that writing comedy can be hard. (or maybe that's just me) ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: The Strange Gambit Declined: A What If.... Story
Ok, wow Well first off this is a really interesting idea, you certainly know what your talking about and you’ve captured the personalities of both Tony and Thanos (not an ...
Apr 18, 2021
