TheMythMaster

This is a lovely little poem. I like the rhythm in the last three stanzas, although it does feel a little lacking in the first couple. The repetition of "gosh, ...

Hello! This is quite a vivid chapter you've put together, and it builds tension well, beginning with Lily's annoyance at Iris, andoving into Talyn and Hyancinth's intriguing news. Speaking of ...

Hello Messenger, Myth here for a little review. So overall I found this a great read. I really like your descriptions, everything flows nicely, things feel vivid and realistic, and ...

Hello There Koco! Popping in for a review down here... First impressions: I like the characters, there is a lot of range between their personalities, and (after I’d figured out ...

Hallo There. Hopping down here for a review.. Well, I already like Kieren. And it seems you’ve got me hooked on reading more! I can’t wait for the next part. ...

Hallo there. A small review if your interested… First off, you’ve excelled in characters’ descriptions and speech. Despite the large number of people exchanging dialogue, I was never confused ab

Hallo there, Youbeaucupid. Apologise if my review’s not great… it’s been a while since I reviewed something. So, I’ll start with the best bits. First Leyra and Ryker’s relationship is ...

Hello there! Dropping in here for a quick review… whew, haven’t done one of these in a while. So first of all: The characters are really well done; you didn’t ...

Myth here to review! O.K first off I quite like the title. Around the globe no matter our background, ethnicity or religion we all experience and witness some kind of ...

Hallo! Myth here to review! I hope you find this helpful! Tansy sets down her mug, staring blankly back down at the papers lying in front of her. Her brain ...

Myth here to review for you! “Wyatt!” we all shouted, rushing in the direction of the scream. nice opening sentence definitely draws me in. “That way,” she said, nodding confidently. ...

Myth here to review for you Ok so starting off, the first part with all the dialogue about finding the book is done well, the idea that the book their ...

Hey Harry I noticed this part still hasn’t been reviewed so I’m here to do it! I haven’t read any of the other chapters so I may miss some things ...

Myth here to review! So starting off, the intro was good, but it seemed to start from Casey's point of view and then around here "...Yes." Rose stiffened, waiting for ...

Myth here to review! To start off I'd just like to say I really like the title. On this peaceful spring afternoon, the sky was a robin's egg blue with ...