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Hey there! Here I am taking a break from some killer homework to review your prologue! I thought I would try something new for this review mainly because it was ...

Hey there! I love reading dialogues like these! It is the kind of story that doesn't fully resolve in the end, but that was a good thing. It was very ...

I am here to review, as requested! Now, I don't normally review poems mainly because I am not a poet and I don't claim to know much about poetry. I ...

So here I am, as per request. It is currently 7 am and I have a coffee beside me, so I'm in a pretty good mood. I guess that is ...

Hey hey, there! Let me start out by asking something. Are you French? I only ask, because I am and I recognize some of the mistakes you made as being ...

Hey there, I'm back! I see that you have made a lot of improvements since the last time I read it. The story is really coming along really well and ...

I am normally not that interested in poetry, but I clicked on this link and all of a sudden, I just wanted to keep on reading! This was just plain ...

Okay, before I start, I will be honest for a second. I have never read the Twilight saga. Okay, I think that's enough on that. Due to the fact that ...

Okay, I actually liked how you started the story. It was a risky idea, but I believe it paid off well. It had shock value to it that took me ...

Hey there, I'm here to review! Okay, first impressions, I really liked the story. It was very creative and intriguing. I found myself wanting to read more, so that's a ...

Okay, as per request I shall attempt to review a poem. Just be advised that, even though I have written a grand total of 4 poems in my lifetime it ...

This was pretty awesome, I think. It was short, but not too short if you know what I mean. That being said, I do have a few suggestions. Firstly, I ...

Hey there! Really interesting concept and way to execute the story! It kept me interested to see what was happening. Well, I hope I'm not repeating what someone else has ...

I really genuinely enjoyed this piece. I especially liked your incorporation of repetition on the "You're losing your memory" bits. It almost seemed as if the character kept on being ...

Okay, I hope this isn't coming too late, but here I go anyways. I really liked the premise of the monologue but I think you can make it more of ...