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Re: He ruined it.
I know like i said before a lot of the rhymes are elementary, i really want to fix it.
Mar 22, 2006 -
Re: He ruined it.
I can here ther critisism already. I worte this poem with a friend. It Switches perspective when ever it says 'Guy' or 'Girl'. So if it says 'Guy' above a ...
Mar 21, 2006 -
Re: The Good Kind of Pain
This poem was revised and completely rewritten, with new words and everything. But the message is still the same. It definitly the most unique love poem i've ever written.
Feb 25, 2006 -
Re: Girl
This poem is very powerful, very enjoyable. Impossible to not be liked. Kudos
Feb 25, 2006 -
Re: The One in the Shadows
I wrote this for a person that a care for more than they know. It started out as something i was venting with but it turned into something more
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: I think my brain just died...
I think it was really good, in an exquisite sort of way. Nice stuff.
Feb 23, 2006 -
Re: A Beat
tthanks Liz
Dec 5, 2005 -
Re: don't become invisible
its interesting, lol. nice work.
Dec 5, 2005 -
Re: December 14th
IT AWESOME!
Dec 4, 2005