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Ok, so I think it would've been nicer if there were definite stanza's, there were times where i would read the next line and have to stop because it didn't ...

OMG! (can i even say that?) Buenvenidos! (did i spell that right?) ANYWAYSSS its great that you're writing again! on to your story It is a good START but it ...

OK, so this was really deep, and I think I get what you're trying to say, but on to some reviewing words which I consider fightin words.(ok, that was really ...

That was what EVERYone goes through, I loved it. I couldn't stop smiling come line one. Although it might've been either easier to read, or something of the sort if ...

I liked the devious sound to the poem, but there were some lines that didn't quite fit. I've never been good at grammar, and it aggravates me when people pin ...

well, I very much liked the theme behind the whole thing. Since you say it's a song, it kind of needs some Rhyme and Scheme, or some rhythm and meter. ...

Let me start by saying that I was caught in by this little story from sentence one! Bravo! As for clarity, I sometimes had to read something twice because I ...

Ok! I read some of the reviews that people have posted, and verve is a word! It means to have a lot of enthusiasm, and to be lively. I think ...

Alright, well first off I find it a very interesting poem. However, I think it might've been a little easier to read if you had done stanza's. Also, words like ...

Although your poem is good in both expressional terms and emotional terms I thought the wording could be a bit stronger. With poetry I personally think that the best poems ...