Teardrop

Hi! I'm Tear, and I'm going to review this today. First of all, I thought this was really interesting. Before posting, I suggest looking over your work to make sure ...

Hi! I'm Teardrop and I thought I might review this today! First of all, this is really short. I haven't read the first chapter though. And usually, in a chapter ...

Hi! I'm Teardrop... I usually don't review poetry but for some reason today I'm in the mood... odd. I thought this was really interesting, kinda creepy in a way if ...

Hi, well, I don't usually review poems but I really liked this so I thought I might drop a review on this while i'm here anyway! I loved this, really ...

Hey! Teardrop here to review! -First of all, you need to space this out. It's all jumbled together, and it's hard to read. - You need to check your capitilization ...

Hi, I'm Teardrop! First of all, when you start dialogue, it becomes it's own paragraph, so when one of your characters speaks be sure to remember that and make some ...

Hi! I'm Teardrop, and i shall review this today. : ) Comments in red. ( I also highlighted mistakes in red ) Running. It was all I could think about. ...

Hey! Teardrop here on request! I'm gonna try and give you a useful review here but I didn't catch anything really big sooo here it goes! Try and avoid those ...

Hey! Teardrop here to review! First of all, I think this is a really cool idea and I hope to read more. But this could use a little work no ...

This is epicness. I was laughing so freaking hard! Whenever I wanna laugh now or need something to make me happy I read this and it totally makes my day. ...

Hey, Teardrop here to review this! Oh and welcome to YWS! ( Although I'm a bit late ) Now, first of all I suggest spacing this out a bit more. ...

Hey! Teardrop here to review! : ) First of all, I liked this very much. Starting another novel eh? You're brave. : ) Anyway, I hope you continue this because ...

Hey! Teardrop here! I'm no real great at reviewing poems but I'll give it a shot. :D This is a special type of format for a poem. If you want ...

Hey! Teardrop here! I like this, thought I believe this is a letter, so I would probobly add a signature and a closing! Ithought that sometimes, in the poem, that ...

Hey! Teardrop here to review! you probably move somewhere too. "move" should be "moved" “Alright, petit frère.” He said as we stood in our backyard, our feet on the grass. ...