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Hello there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D There are three things that should be known about me: 1) My real ...

Can you do me a favour, darling? Put a blank line between each of your paragraphs. Your formatting right now is kinda painful on the eyes. X_X And remember, every ...

Hello there! I think I've seen you around YWS a couple times? In case I'm making things up in my head again, my name is Saint and I shall be ...

Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D I yelled on the line with Kate, crying hysterically. It's kind of obvious ...

*blinks* Holy flying crackers... that was disturbing. Erm... it's well written and jam-packed with emotion, but a little hard to understand. Maybe that was your point? Hm. The style it's ...

As per your request, m'dear! :D and of course, bean sprout without having to jump up Not a big fan of "of course" being there, but that's just personal preference. ...

As per your request, Jared! =D Have you ever listened to your heart thump against your chest at night, when no one is around to hear it? This is a ...

Yay! More! =D Mick was a fourteen, short brown hair and amazing eyes. Mick was a 14? So he was a giant number with eyes, arms, legs, and such? Haha. ...

As per your request, Reaky m'dear. ^_^ Haha, wow that was a quick read. I think I love you just for that. xD I've never been a huge fan of ...

Hiya! I haven't seen you around YWS before. Welcome! I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. Hmm, I don't think I've ever critted fanfiction on YWS before. Congratulations! ...

Ahoy there! Welcome to YWS! My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. ;) Awesome username, by the way. Sweeney Todd = awesome flick. Alicia Bonnie sat ...

Hello there! Haven't seen you around before. My name is Saint, welcome to YWS, and I shall be your critiquer today! :D “I am going to be gone tomorrow” the ...

Hello there! I don't think I've seen you around YWS before? My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Aww, this is all you're going to ...

*bounces in* Round two! You still suck? Lol. Before she placed the cellphone back into the pockets of her skirt, Cell phone = two words. *Random note* Did she always ...

Yo Andy! *waves* Um... you suck! No, just kidding. But you said to piss you off. =D Their brightness was the reason it attracted the holiday makers’ attention. Isn't holidaymakers ...