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Hi there! Welcome to YWS. My name is Saint. =D Here on YWS, we have a rule about doing 2 critiques for every piece of literature you post. Please be ...

Hello! Have I introduced myself to you before? Can't remember. Anyway, hi! I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Her dark wig made the heat unbearable and ...

Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D ...There's not much to critique here. Er, anyway. ...

Ahoy there! I haven't seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D The kindness Will was showing her filled her small ...

Hello again Fishy! *waves* Yay for porridge, eh? ;) *reads* as she smelt what had been left for her breakfast. Smelled* Faye retorted dryly, "you have nothing to eat in ...

Yo yo yo, Little Tin Fishy! *waves* It was a decidedly sickening feeling, and the main reason why Klar never frequented the clubs; regardless of where they were. Something about ...

Hihihi! :D I'm Saint and I shall be your critiquer today! Feel special, woo! *throws confetti* ...I'm okay. Promise. “What were you thinking, putting those two together?! Eurgh, double punctuation ...

Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint. To fix your formatting problem, all you have to do is hit "enter" twice at the ...

Hello there! Welcome to YWS! Please remember to do two critiques before posting any of your own work -- the 2:1 critique-to-literary work ratio is a rule we have here. ...

Hey there! *waves* Can you do me a favour, love? Put a line between each of your paragraphs, to make it easier to read. I wouldn't be so up in ...

Hey Rei! *waves* Meep, journal-style story. Just a forewarning, they tend to bug me and my opinions tend to come out biased. Advance apologies. xD This week, I’m am doing ...

Sorry it's taken me so long to get to this! I usually critique stories all at once, but something got lost in translation and I haven't read this yet. Apologies. ...

Hello there! *waves* I think I've seen you around YWS a couple times. She landed her eyes on Marty. "Her eyes landed on Marty" would get rid of the passive ...

Hi there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint, and I shall be your critiquer today! Woohoo! *throws confetti* The girl would grow up into ...

Ahoy there! Don't think I've seen you around YWS before. My name is Saint and I shall be your critiquer today. :D Upon the city of Naethr, a chill floated ...