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Re: Couple of Seconds
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to be reviewing your story. Firstly, I have to say that I have never read anything like this before. What I enjoyed ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Delete
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to be reviewing your story. This is a short story so it is going to be a short review. First things first, ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: The System: 2
Hello. I am going to review your chapter. Again, I have to say that I very much enjoyed reading your chapter. You have introduced more intriguing characters and I have ...
Nov 8, 2014 -
Re: Escaping Home: Chapter One
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to review your chapter. This is going to be a quick review as I am off to bed soon. First things first, ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: I am Matt Bennett
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to be reviewing your story. Before I begin my review, my advice to you is that you split your story up into ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: The Open Window
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to be reviewing your story. This is a good story. It is certainly very tense and the suspension builds up throughout the ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: The System: One
My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to review your chapter. First things first, I very much enjoyed reading your chapter. Your writing is very fluid and everything flows smoothly. ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Triumphant Will
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to be reviewing your story. I do not row myself but I can identify and relate with your character. I used to ...
Nov 1, 2014 -
Re: Georgia Classics
Hello. My name is TeaLeaf. I am going to review your piece. First things first, as BookWolf has mentioned, your chapter looks as if it is one huge paragraph. This ...
Oct 31, 2014