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Re: I Wish I Could Take It Back
I love this poem. I say this alot but I really do love your poem. It has so much truth and heart. Anyone could relate, well not anyone but a ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: The Chase Chapter one: The boy
Hey I love this story, it was amazing. I must say the ending to this chapter is a cliffhanger. Now you might want to add more scenerary, now I don't ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: We're Not Your Primroses
I love it, anyone can relate to this. I am not going to correct your grammer and spelling if you have any because I am not to good at that. ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Dirty Knees, Cloudy Skies
I don't give out grammar errors and such because, well I suck at those myself so who am I to say what your doing wrong if I can't fix my ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: The Devil's Resting Place
Wow! That was amazing. It carried all the places where evil may reside and instead of calling it evil, you called it the devil. I love your poem it was ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Dead Boy.
So this is the first poem I have read that wasn't created by a famous author, and I loved it. I have to admit that the images as I read ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Sugar-Coated Melody
In line five you put the wrong there it should be there instead of their. I have the chills this poem has gave me chills, that never happens. I love ...
Sep 15, 2016 -
Re: They Call Me Crazy
I must admit I laughed a little at the end, those last two lines I found somewhat funny. Not that the poem is a funny one just that the ending ...
Sep 15, 2016 -
Re: Another Father's Day at The Cabin
I am speechless. That is such a sad poem, I hope it wasn't based on true events. I still loved it tho, even tho it is dark it is wonderful. ...
Sep 15, 2016