Tay01

He's a teenager! Quite smart for a teenager like that.

Oops! That part of teddy bear was wrong. I guess my crazy brother aded it to embarrass me in front of the entire YWS! ;(

Alright. Thanks.

Oh sorry then. My bad. I never do good at metaphors and imagining the other side of the story. :(

Haha, anyway, nice name, M for Moo.

so unknown391625, you are no more unknown since you've just revealed your name? :D

I really liked this poem. It is not too much to read and really understandable (if it is a word. I do not know if understandable is a word) However, ...

you are welcome TaliaSankEden

Well this one is rather short, I do not really know what to say about this. This poetry would not even take half a minute to present. But still, I ...

Thank you Deanie. But about the parents allowing children to go on an adventure. Well, actually, I, did not know what was his escape plan. So I simply wrote that ...

Thanks. I had to write that Robin told his parents because I did not know how Robin will make an escape plan. :)

Haha! Alright, thanks but I think you have got a little mistake in your review. Apparently commas DO appear before the end of each speech mark, then followed by a ...

Sorry, I always mess up with elaborating ideas. I kinda switch around like spaghetti. That's one of my worst weakness in writing. :(

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Not bad, yeah, not bad...Hmmm...........

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Hello Tay01 here with a little review about your dramatic and narrative poetry. Well overall, I kind of like it. It is ( if you know what it is ) ...