Tawsif

Pretty decent story, Gnomish. I was hoping that someone in YWC comes up with a story on corona virus. Glad that you did. Why not write a broader version? In ...

Hi, 4evergreen! Thought I'll review the second chapter as well. First of all, I like the format you introduced in this chapter. Switching from present to past and back and ...

Hey, Knight731. I wanted to review this piece for two days, but just couldn't do it. You must be pretty desperate for a review since no one has reviewed it ...

Hi, 4vergreen! This is not a bad start for a novel at all. The tone that you used in this chapter is dripping with depression of the MC for the ...

The series continues! Once again, I'm quite interested to see where it finally goes. I was just thinking about your description. You are good at portraying a sort of not-too-serious, ...

You really write plain and simple! And brief too! Very brief. You know, your style reminds me of 'stream of consciousness', where writers simply write everything the characters think inside ...

Em, I'm not actually a native English-speaking guy. I mean, English isn't my first language. So, I don't know that much about poetry. But this was fantastic, and I thought ...

"Tawsif Reviewing LZpianogirl' series continues! And just so you know, I'm loving this novel. Since I've read a number of your writings by now, I've started to understand how you ...

I liked this pretty much, Hedwiggle. Let's get into the review then. Firstly, typos. "An adult isn't supposed to be as freaked out as you just to open up a ...

I feel sorry for uncle William. I don't see anything bad about him, and still Quinn is always so mean to him. I like this, the way it's going. Just ...

It's going quite well so far, pianogirl! Let's get into the review. Once again, I found some tense issue. You used past tense in some parts where you should've stuck ...

I love this, LZpianogirl. I had started reading this because I wanted to review some works of novel, and now I totally love it. I like the tone you use ...

This is quite good. Maybe all the writers need to write such personal accounts about why they chose to write in the first place. It's a good way to keep ...

Is there anything special about the 10th of November, 2017 I should know? Okay, never mind! You know, thegolderbird, I am a nature lover. That's why I love to write ...

This really was plain and simple. You portrayed the life of a depressed teenager quite well. This is quite a common thing that teenagers feel a bit of aversion towards ...