Tarshni

wow! really amazing poem! It is incredable that you were able to write such a long poem that keeps you reading and drawn to what you are abouit to say ...

"I would have thought That after all this time, My Reason Would not have been what you are." Personally, I feel you use too many blunt stops where they aare ...

I like the fact that you have written your poem in a very unique style... although maybe if you had started each stanza with a differen word instead of 'another' ...

Hey, I noticed quite a few mistakes throughout your poem. Even so, I found the message of your poem moving and extremely just. I think there are people out there ...

wow... i have to say this but poems that involve love move me.. the possible heart ache as well as the beauty of love itself... I love when both sides ...

wow... Honestly I have a passion for children and cannot stand to see abuse. This poem just made me want to cry.. It is so sad... I love the way ...

hey, Really amazing for a 14 year old! I love the use of your wording to esxplain and make the reader feel the emotion you feel when writting your peom. ...