TanyaStender

Thank you for your comment. I will definitely take it to heart! Glad you like the story so far ;)

It is not something that make the story chaotic and if you use it as an emphasize, then it is also good. I do not think you should change it ...

Thank you for your reply, I'm really gratefull! ;D

Okay :) Thank you ;)

Thank you :)

Thank you very much :)

Thank you for you feedback :) - The whole story is 28 chapters, but I haven't corrected it yet that's why I only put in five chapters. I wanted to ...

I really like the way you describe yourself. I love how you can read and feel how the person is feeling. You can put yourself in her shoes and that ...

This is really good! :)

It's really good :)

I really love your way of writing a poem. When I read it I begin to think about the person you are writing about and it sets some questions through ...