TanyaStender

Hello! ;) I enjoyed reading your story; you explain things in detail with makes one imagination better. the charactors is well written and you catch their personality throughout the chapter. ...

Hey! I really like your thinking throughout the story - the describtion of repetition is well done. you make the reader feel the hardship of being stuck in time and ...

It is amazing. You catch the reader from the first section. You describe everything really well which is something i love - this makes the reader follow the story even ...

I think that is would be good if you made the story into sections, not a new line almost every time. maybe write the chapter and after reread it and ...

I am into Yaoi and i really like your story. You have a talent for writing - the language was good, but sometimes the sentences was a little confusing and ...

Hey! Sorry if I repeat something that has been said before. This was a good prologue, but your explaination of the gods was a little too long. The dialogue was ...

Did you hate cat's when you wrote this? ;) The poem is a little short in my opinion, but that is just me talking. I like the way you use ...

It's a little short poem, but good as well. The way I read the poem is that you are talking about a person that has problems and always have someone ...

You can really feel the emotions in this poem. It is really beautiful and opens the eyes for some people that maybe thought that way. You can feel through your ...

I really like the way you describe yourself. I love how you can read and feel how the person is feeling. You can put yourself in her shoes and that ...