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Re: Delete
Could everyone try to give their opinions on the overall story? As well as nitpicks, that is a lovely way of reviewing in my eyes. If you really don't have ...
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Painting
Thankyou! All the compliments are so great!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Delete
Periwinkle came and attacked it first! How suprising! Thankyou! I'll be looking into the nitpicks soon ^^
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: PHOENIX, or, Set Fire to the River
Very nice! I liked basically everything about it!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Courage
Very nice! I just love narrative poetry and this was a good job of one!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Time Flies
Oh! I loved this one! Personify time! Brilliant idea! Two thumbs up to you and a gold star to go with it!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Under The Twilight
This was very good! Despite its potential cliche-ness, you avioded it beautifully and created a whole other idea! *gold star for you*
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Bury Her Anyway
Wow! Thankyou! This means so much to me all the compliments from everyone!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Bury Her Anyway
Thankyou for the compliment! It means tons to me!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Monster
Wow. I'm so glad your friend is better. This is rough (meaning emotional, not choppy.). Good job, I really liked this!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Painting
Thankyou for the suggestions and compliments, I changed the beginning...I don't know if it works, but it does for me. ^^ I also want to say just how much I ...
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Painting
Wow, thankyou everyone! This means more than you can imagine to me!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: Painting
Wow, thankyou everyone! I guess I'll be working to improve this one despite the fact that it was spontaneous when I wrote it...!
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: Painting
Sorry for the bump
Apr 23, 2008 -
Re: First Kiss
Haha! That was amazingly captivating! I didn't even blink to quit reading until it was a dream! Good work, and keep writing.
Apr 23, 2008