Taleof6kids

Hi BeTheChange, I still feel brand new to this place and especially when writing reviews. But after reading your piece, I had to write. This is excellent! I enjoyed reading ...

Hi Ivory, I'm kinda new here, and I'm going to attempt a review on your work. But first, I really enjoyed reading this first chapter, and I'm anxious to read ...

Hello! First I would like to say that I agree wholeheartedly with everything rohan said in his review! He was spot-on! However, I did read this more poetically and the ...

Not at all cliche! This is really, really good! The dialogue and the descriptions are very well done, and really captivate the reader from the beginning to the end. Very ...

Hello. I came to review, but this is a tough one to do that with because of the emotional content. First of all, let me say, as a reader, I ...

Hi Melanie. Good job on this first chapter of your mystery! I like how you introduced the characters and really made the reader feel like we are a part of ...

Hi Chie! This is very good! I really enjoyed the dialogue and how it built the characters and gave me a better insight on each one. And the end of ...

Wow! This is really well written. Your word choice is spot-on, and I could really sense the emotion and feeling of how depression can really consume and overtake you. This ...

Hey, Niko. Your title really caught my eye, and I just wanted to let you know that I enjoyed reading this. Your tone was good...you stayed clear of sounding bitter ...

Hi! I'm kinda new to this, but I really, really enjoyed reading this first chapter of your novel! You introduced so many mysteries here and I am anxious to read ...

Hi Spilledink (I love that username!)! There are a few technical and grammatical errors here, but for the most part, you did a great job at introducing us to the ...

Hi Chase, I am very new to this (actually, this is my very first comment!), so please be patient. I did want to let you know I thought you did ...