TakeThatYouFiend

I don't know why, but I feel as though the last line rhymes! The last phrase is beautiful, a metaphor that returns when one is thinking about somthing else entirely. ...

It appears that other reviewers are looking for deep philosophical metaphors and links to human rights and other universal themes, but to me, and I might be wrong, but all ...

Great poem, and I am very glad you have rhymed it. I find poems that are indistinguishable from paragraphs kind of annoying. A few of the rhymes were a little ...

A very true account of trying to move silently at night, despite it being a subject easy to write old favorites with, the accidental creak of the door causing the ...

This seems to be ok, but not my cup of tea. Leaving spelling aside (not a problem) it has a feeling of conclusion, without anything happening. This is a problem ...

I plan to write a review for all three of your short storys, but each will be individual from the other. It will be up to you as to which ...

I don't know what triggered this either, and I dread to think what. An Autumn walk perhaps? Or mabey just a walk through a graveyard hit by a tornado. Despite ...

This work is good for a number of reasons, the main one being that it's it has extended layers of description, meaning you don't quite know what's going on until ...