TakeThatYouFiend

Like my brother below this has a very John Martin post apocalyptic feel to it, however I do not read it as postaapocalyptic. More an outsider view on today. A ...

Ahahehehoho! Mwahahahaha! Enough with the peculiar laughs, time to pick holes! Firstly, there are no stanzas. This would be improved methinks by stanzas separating the pigattacks. (New compound word :

This was amazing. The imagery is superb, and I simply love the slow release of information. Also I loved the structure of the poem: The rhyme scheme was perfect as ...

What a cheerful poem. But this was genuinely eerie. The rhyme scheme was nice. I like a work with a consistent rhyme scheme, and yours was original enough not to ...

I find it hard to describe it as anything other than pathetic, but I loved this; I use pathetic in it's original meaning, "makes me cry." I'm strange like that. ...

Greetings my friend! A couple of criticisms for this fine piece of poetry if I may. The first concerns the title. I dislike slashes at anytime, but particularly so In ...

Too true. Well not too true. Just true. I am not sure I would classify this as poetry, but then I am not sure what I would classify it as, ...

I am not going to pretend I got the metaphor. But please excuse my ignorance. Anyhow, I would change your punctuation a little if I may. First of a full ...

This was "translated" for me by quickly reading the below review, and in the light this has afforded me this is a very beautiful poem. However it could be clarified ...

As the reviewer below says, this is not properly a haiku. However I have encountered others who hold the syllables per line is less important than the total syllables, so ...

Greetings this fine review day! I have a few suggestions for the first series of pairs/opposites. Take them or leave them as you will. I think they could do with ...

Hello again! I think have already expressed my liking for poems with a solid and original structure, and the last line of every stanza here does that wonderfully, and the ...

I should have known you wouldn't degrade yourself to something as humiliatingly happy as a happy couple. JK. Anyways, a positive and negative comment on the same verse. I refer ...

Hello! Unlike deep crystal below me I do not find this rushed. :-) The text is plain. Normally this would be a bad thing: Lack of imagery and impressive words ...

Teenage relatable. *sighs* First of WAHOOOOOOOO! For two reasons. This is your happiest poem yet and RHYMING COUPLETS! (it has just occurred to me that should not be quite that ...