TZH

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No ! I haven't read "seven ages" but now I'll. Thank you for the comparison beyond my imagination. I wrote "lovely were the days.... I was a little kid" because ...

Hope It's better now . I just edited.

I'll work on it. Thank you!

Great! Blessings ! :-)

Edited it:-)

Look when I write in a flow. So many typing errors. So be clear , confidante and write. I appreciate your skills. :-)

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I'll surely edit ot as you said because I just posted it without checking otherwise that would not had happened . And the lines in which you said it's confusing ...

Dewr Aley ! I found it really nice . As you know I am not so well in all these which you are quoting so according to my perspective it's ...

Honoured I am feeling. Thank you Ayush! Stay happy, successful and blessed!:-)

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Nice piece of poetry but depressing somehow what I feel. But well as its a poetry and after reviewing I only want to suggest to write more and we get ...

Hey dear! I love your penning. The way you carved the words its nice. But it lacks That ayention through which aperson can relate to ownself . But its just ...

Keep it up :-)