TSun

Right, TSun, your response is immature and childish. I'm not a great writer, but this is the opinion of a reader who happens to critique, and if I'm not interested, ...

Hello TSun. Blinkster here. Cynic alert. Again, I awoke to the diced sunshine plastered on to my ceiling. But now, it wasn't to the sound of the birds, or the ...

thanks you all =) really appreciated.

Wow. Ok I'm having a serious sense of AWESOMENESS. Haha ok that sounded like such a teenage girl thing to say... But what else did you expect? The only thing ...

Thanks so much for clearing that up for me! :D And thank you, too, for being so sweet and kind about it; you'd make a fine teacher--just ask your friends ...

Again *I don't get the title.* TSun *If this is your pen name, it doesn't need to be here... or below, either.* if i want my pen name to be ...

For starters, I really, REALLY love this peice It takes everyday things that we all have to deal with and puts it all into context Personally, I love the deepness ...

BFG wrote: No problem! Don't worry about it, we all do stuff like that. I've been around here for a while now and I still don't know what I'm doing ...

TOTALY AGREE!!!!! Have you seen that poster that says: CENCORSHIP HAS BEEN FOUND TO CAUSE BLINDNESS IN CHILDREN.? Any way... you should talk to me the next time you're online. ...

Very powerful. I like the last lines, about freedom of speech and the right to remain silent. In fact, you're too good. You are making me feel bad about my ...

No problem! Don't worry about it, we all do stuff like that. I've been around here for a while now and I still don't know what I'm doing much of ...

Hey, TSun! Maybe this is forbidden or unethical, but I'm sure a mod will correct me if it is... You're supposed to review at least two works before you post ...

simple and to the point pure dimes!

please take this as constructive criticism : if you want to make it rhyme, then take time to make sure it flows and makes sense use a more elaborate rhyme ...

comments plz!