Published February 1, 2009
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TSun
TSun
(Verse 1)
Democracy, capitalism and freedom of speech,
hidden behind their promises, who's the leech?
one size fits all schools, what is education?
knowledge I seek is not what they teach,
Still they tell us to reach
higher, liberate us from this false speech,
liar, those who don't practice what they preach.
Common priests, white and black,
a fortified wall of lies, none can breach.
While in schools, we suffer a rare disease,
the lack of thinking, formulas
given to form our expertise,
future promises seem so easy while adrift in the breeze,
but we don't know of the economic collapse,
our future is only a tease,
so we can be capped, at our best
we can hope for a "perhaps",
perhaps a time lapse. Sad,
everything's a new concept we must learn to grasp.
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