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Sorry it's taken me so long to review this for you (thanks for the PM). I like how your main character, Kyle, he's very intellectual and you use most of ...

I love the imagery! I could actually feel how she did, well I kind of had before but that's another story . . .Anyway I really like how you sucked ...

When I read the title I was a bit unsure that I would like the poem. Well this is coming from a girl who's friend dressed up as a princess ...

Hi, Smriti! This was a great narrative poem. It really sucked you in. But there was a few typos but not enough to ruin your effect. One was that on ...

I just finished reading both chapters and I'm hooked. I love the plot and everything else. I can easily relate to Alexandria when she talks about her family and how ...

I actually read vampire diaries as a joke but I got pulled in! I thought it came out after Twilight but it came out before. My favorite by L.J. Smith ...

I agree with the revisions of a previous reviewer. But overall it was good. My favorite stanza would have to be, I am slow and burning expecting every particle within ...

Hello there! This poem was really good. I rather like how he/she tells about how they regret leaving their lover. There was just one thing I suggest. In this stanza: ...

I just finished reading this chapter and I'm officially in love with Taboo. Your very skilled at writing! I love Lucas because he is just kind of the silent, mysterious ...

I like how you interpret your feelings into this piece. I believe it's about the narators parents and how there trust changes while they grow up. I have had the ...

I had this happen many times. I love your work how it has your own personal twist in it. But as you asked, I tell you how I think you ...

For this poem you need to capitalize the first letter in every line. So instead of because I know that you will always be apart of what you should do: ...

I liked it. I've also felt like this before where everyone is pretty much surrounding you and you feel like you might suffocate. Just some suggestions I have for you. ...

This was a powerful poem. I like how you used different ways to describe how sad the character is. How the their heart is broken. I have to say my ...

This is pretty good. I'm sure it would be twice as good if you put it to music. It reminds me a bit like cheatercheaterbestfriendeater by nevershoutnever. And that's a ...