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This was a very nice piece. I enjoyed the use of italics and the unique layout you used which was quite eye catching but to admit, just slightly confusing. It ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was very unique and I could here your voice through the poem which kind of reminded me of (I know this sounds weird) ...

Hey Chelse, T here. Actually something like this verse happened to one of my friends recently: Says he'll kill himself Just to see her cry Walks out the front door ...

I really like this poem! It explains writer's block perfectly. It's not too short but not too long. It almost has the impression of a writer who is writing this ...

Hey WritersUnleashed, T here. I have to say this was a successful experiment. I've tried (and failed miserably) when it came to repetition in poetry, but this is very well ...

Hey Shailz, T here. I was very confused by your poem. It didn't make much sense to me. Are you yelling at yourself or some one else? And I have ...

Wow! That is just on amazing poem! I loved the whole thing! I don't have any nitpicks but I have to admit I didn't think learnt was a word at ...

Hey Boo, T here. I have to say I like the rhyming and it takes a skilled person to make a rhyming poem because it's hard to find the words. ...

First off I just love the metaphors! Is this poem made from an experience with a dumb boyfriend/girlfriend? I like how you interpreted the hurt and rage that the narrator ...

I really love this novel of yours! It's painfully truthful and pretty darn close to real life situations I've been pushed in. I only have one nitpick this chapter and ...

Hey sher, I have a some nitpicks to point out and I'll highlight all my changes in red. You wonder why I am like this . . . Why I ...

Hey Psudiname, T here. So to start off I say I was therally impressed on your history and the background of the story that made it extremely belivable (The third ...

Hey Eternal, T here. I found this poem quite engaging. I was caught into it by about the second stanza. The picture it creates is heartbreaking yet so true. We ...

Finally, a crime scene investigation! I decided to take my keyboard off caps lock for once. Is the young cop Derek Young? Because I don't remember another character name Derek. ...

Yellow! T here! Thanks for your message! I thought it was very interesting and like another reviewer said, it was like the book The City Of Ember , but it ...