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sup this is Thunder Gem Studios (ma YouTube channel). I absolutely loved this it gave me chills. I like the way you repeated the same paragraph over and over again ...

Thunder Gem Studios here and... Wow this is quite violent and descriptive but that's really good. I like the way its a lot of detail but in such short poem ...

Thunder Gem Studios here Hay nice poem Its quite power full. I enjoyed reading it It's sad and hopeful at the same time its cleaver. I am not good at ...

Thunder Gem Studios here Wow I really liked this its creative its sweet I understand how this got on the most liked list. Its a clever way to think about ...

Thunder Gem Studios here I love it Its a great story Line its interesting and you could have a lot of fun with this character and story. I respect that ...

Hi TGS here I think this is really sweet and romantic. I like how you repeated the first two verses for a dramatic finish. The inly thing I would say ...

I love what you have done here turning some thing iconic like flowers into murderous killers. a lot of people say poem's have to rhyme but that's not true. Are ...

its very thought provoking. I like how you said "A little white child who knows no better" there are Meany debates about why we don't do more and complain about ...

You were very descriptive and made the image of the hall and the people very clear. The way you wrote was just like they would speak round that era. The ...

I liked how you foreshadowed that some thing was going to happen to jeak with "closing the door cautiously, as if his lover were sleeping inside" it was very cleaver. ...

its really good-sad..... majestic is a better word. its interesting that you went from a dirty street seen to a natural clean but I sort of wanted to have a ...