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Re: “You’re Puerto Rican?!”
What I really like about this poem is that inner beating of an identity. We all feel drawn to our heritage in some way, after all, it is woven in ...
Jun 14 -
Re: An Ode to the Great Exploding Turnip
Thank you for your service, Great Exploding Turnip! It was really an honor. What I like about this poem is the dynamics of James Bond and Maximus Decimus Meridius mixed ...
Apr 25 -
Re: You are my Spring (By Jasmine)
Strong yet gentle smell of desire. The continuous usage of the term "my Spring" not only evokes a picture of spring as a season but also of a growing desire ...
Apr 25 -
Re: weather
This song clearly shows how beautiful pictures of ordinary things like regular weather can lead us into something much deeper. What I find interesting inside your song is that looming ...
Apr 23 -
Re: leaking through the floorboards
Firstly, thank you for this poem of yours. It is refreshing and powerful. "those salty tears of mine dissolved into the sea, betraying my own promises." I find this verse strong ...
Sep 16, 2024 -
Re: Confession Notes for Unnamed People:
Dear Ellie, firstly I wanted to say: Thank you for this. This is a very intimate mosaic of yours. This part of your mosaic of life is strong, personal, powerful ...
Jul 13, 2024 -
Re: Blank World
Thank you for sharing this poem! I must admit that this poem seemed like one interesting ride throughout this world that was made from letters and words. Poem shows strong ...
Jul 13, 2024 -
Re: Love During a Patriarchy
Strong poem about a strong heart that is beating in this hard world. Strong pictures mixed with hope and despair. Love meets cruelty. Belonging meets loneliness. And yet, all blends ...
May 1, 2024 -
Re: Never let me go
Strong message about remembering and about love. What I find fascinating is the last verse that expresses strength and call to return the love that was given. This poem combines ...
May 1, 2024
