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hi yall! this is like my first post in three years. turns out at the age of 21 i still write barely comprehensible poems about love, just a little more hopeless ahahaha. im trying to get back into writing because it's been so long and i want get out of my burnout. i missed everyone! i hope everyone's been well <3333 if we don't know each other please say hi, im trying to get back into being active on here :)
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Hi!
A strong and good poem that was a good read! Unfortunately, I can't say much, because while I was switching between Google Translate (English is not my native language), my internet went out and now I can't load the image... too bad, I hope it will work later.
Anyway, it's great that you've decided to get back to writing - I hope you're doing well!
Strong poem about a strong heart that is beating in this hard world. Strong pictures mixed with hope and despair. Love meets cruelty. Belonging meets loneliness. And yet, all blends very well. Throughout the whole poem, secret strength and will to live emerges and shines. Thank you for sharing this poem!
Please, continue to write.