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SylvanusGrace

  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: “You’re Puerto Rican?!”

    What I really like about this poem is that inner beating of an identity. We all feel drawn to our heritage in some way, after all, it is woven in ...

    Jun 14
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: An Ode to the Great Exploding Turnip

    Thank you for your service, Great Exploding Turnip! It was really an honor. What I like about this poem is the dynamics of James Bond and Maximus Decimus Meridius mixed ...

    Apr 25
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: You are my Spring (By Jasmine)

    Strong yet gentle smell of desire. The continuous usage of the term "my Spring" not only evokes a picture of spring as a season but also of a growing desire ...

    Apr 25
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: weather

    This song clearly shows how beautiful pictures of ordinary things like regular weather can lead us into something much deeper. What I find interesting inside your song is that looming ...

    Apr 23
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: leaking through the floorboards

    Firstly, thank you for this poem of yours. It is refreshing and powerful. "those salty tears of mine dissolved into the sea, betraying my own promises." I find this verse strong ...

    Sep 16, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Confession Notes for Unnamed People:

    Dear Ellie, firstly I wanted to say: Thank you for this. This is a very intimate mosaic of yours. This part of your mosaic of life is strong, personal, powerful ...

    Jul 13, 2024
  • Poetry » General, Fantasy Re: Blank World

    Thank you for sharing this poem! I must admit that this poem seemed like one interesting ride throughout this world that was made from letters and words. Poem shows strong ...

    Jul 13, 2024
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: Love During a Patriarchy

    Strong poem about a strong heart that is beating in this hard world. Strong pictures mixed with hope and despair. Love meets cruelty. Belonging meets loneliness. And yet, all blends ...

    May 1, 2024
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Never let me go

    Strong message about remembering and about love. What I find fascinating is the last verse that expresses strength and call to return the love that was given. This poem combines ...

    May 1, 2024


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