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Thanks! I will certainly add in the bit about the beginning. I'll also change the conclusion.

Thanks, but I've never read the bible. I'm a Buddhist.

What?

Awesome! I thought it was really great. Will this be a novel?

Just to say, this isn't a script and the formatting is all wrong.

Kay and I thought I saw an error, guess not.

I like this. I like this a lot.

The scene at the end was a montage, but thank you! I'm typing up part two now.

1. JUST TRYING TO MAKE IT QUEERER 2. Kk 3. It's a stereotype. He's all: Perfect class President! (Smile, wink) 4. The reason it's so long is because of all ...

Kay, I need to rewrite these.

Blah And they're just trying to make her feel better, nit bringing up the topic of OW

K, um thanks.

Thanks. I really need to rewrite this.

Okay.