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Thank you amelia, these are just bit of stuff i wrote. Thnak you for saying you like the name Ellima (i made that name up). I loved your poem so ...

I agree, i like the rhyming and description, but it idn't really have a point. Also I didn't like the ending, it was to abrupt. Try and revise the end. ...

Please stop sending stupid poems, they are not funny. well they are a bit but we at yws don't like this kind of joke. Right something serious

I really like this poem. Its abstract but very easy to understand. I think you worked hard on this it very good. I like it, no I LOVE IT!!! Charlotte

I agree with Mad about the rhyming but otherwise I love the poem. Great work!

Ah everyone is so mean but I think at the end you mean midge not smidge. I think this was quite a funny poem a bit like a limerick maybe ...

Its good , I like the part about the salt in your wound. Can I confess that Conro R is actually my brother and I helped him write some of ...

Is that a joke? no offence but if you seriously think that is good... welli can't talk my writing is hardly professional

ok. I thought I was weird but you are a whole new level. funny poem though... please be serious next time but u may have started a new style of ...

Another success!

aaaaaaagh! its not fair! you can write so much better than me nice and short too good work nah !Excellente trabaja! I may be crazy but I know spanish hehehehehe ...

this is the worst poem I ever wrote so I agree that is is rubbish

Good bit of writing BUT not really a poem I'd put it into the story or prose bit whatever they call it good idea though I like anything creepy and ...

Thanks soldier boy jack but I think you're wrong it was so rubbish but thannks anyway charlotte

I know what you mean ,sunshine girl I don't really write poem's very much, I'm more of a novel/ short story girl but Why are some people on this site ...