Swiftfurthewarrior

Is that better?

I didn't post this, did I? Oh shoot. I meant to post the first one.

I agree with the others. A and B the C of D I say. Top-hole! Write on, ~Swiftfurthewarrior.

Hello again! I think chapter two was great! No spelling or grammatical errors. I would not change anything at all. It's perfect. Write on, ~Swiftfur

I'm sure it is. Can you P.M me the link? Thanks. :)

Hey there, Swiftfur here with a review for you! I though you really showed emotion and meaning in this poem. Lots of figurative speech, and the reader could tell from ...

Hey there, aqua! I thought this poem was really well written. I liked the fourth and eighth line, how you added mental thoughts and feeling as well as physical ones. ...

I'm glad you liked it. :)

Amazing! Absolutely top-hole, wot, wot!

Thanks. Y'know,we've always thought of rain as either a sun-shower,or a brutal thunderstorm. What about hurricanes? Tsunamis? I think we should actually help people in need, not just like their ...

Um, I know I submitted this before, but I was trying to get everything into the same folder because I like organizing. Don't ask.

Thanks, I appreciate the suggestions. :D

Thank you. :)