SwallowedByInsanity

Wow. A very good portrayal of your idea with a poetic sort of flow to it. It's definitely got an eerie kind of sound to it and is sort of ...

I actually really found this quite interesting. The metaphor behind the entirety of the poem is truly something to behold. I have but one critique to make on this piece, ...

Lovely. It flowed together like the words of a love song... and yes i know it twas not about love but still! It had the same sort of passion that ...

I like this mainly for the sole fact that you did not conform to the greedy chains of rhyming! I hate it when a poem looks forced and awkward, due ...

I really liked this poem. It seems like you just kind of poured out a little soul onto the page and bam there's a beautiful poem (: Certain parts were ...

I hate to say it but this could use a lot of improvements. 1. please do not use slashes marks '/' instead of hitting enter and starting a new line, ...

Although yes, it was posted in the wrong section, I still rather enjoyed this piece. She hadn’t shed a tear in years. It was because she’d run out of them. ...

My god, I think I'm in love with your work. Is that possible? I think so. haha everything I've ever read that you've written, (which might only be two pieces, ...

mother of god. one of the best damn things i've ever read on this site! i love your metaphors and poetic stature, you're writing style is clearly influenced and matches ...

Incredible. I have no words to say how much I loved this poem! In fact, this has to be one of my favorites on here! Jeez, I have no critiquing ...

Wow, this was so pretty! I actually have absolutely nothing to critique on this (: You've just earned a like from me, which doesn't happen too often! Keep writing!

Walking through the streets, watching strangers do their job. Some are laughing out loud, some are handicapped; and others are buried in blindness. I don't think the word 'some' was ...

Although this may be a work in progress, the pieces are already looking great! You just need to polish off those sharp edges and piece together the various sections. As ...

Wow. I loved this! Not many people post lyrics on here, and yours were presented beautifully. I could hear the melody in my head, which is definitely what every songwriter ...

This poem was beautiful, I loved every line! I could see no awkward phrasing and it had a flow that made me want to sing it like a pop song ...