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I just wrote this for fun, that too when I was bored since I didn't have anything to do because I was sick. D: Anyway. I just wrote it and didn't look for any mistakes. So probably, there's going to be tons of them. 
Enjoy xx! <33
Is a good repitition, as it is also alliteration.
I can't say I agree with your theme, at all, but then, that's cause I'm a shopaholic, so presumably, I'm at a little bit of a bias.
Still, your poem is funny. It's almost comical, and I don't know if you meant it that way, but I like it!
I like how you're bringing in the things we should care about such as in stanza one:
So allover, it was a nice poem. Lighthearted, deeply thought out...
Well done.
NightWriter x
I don't think the word 'some' was the best choice, but feel free to keep it that way if you'd like
as for the rest of the poem, I thought it was well written and I loved the point you put across! "squeaking" was a PERFECT word for those stupid girls! Fantastic job. Keep it up