SwallowedByInsanity

The beginnings of your lines are all sort of awkwardly worded and vary between "thought" "always thought" and "miss" mainly. It's not a good idea to continuously repeat the beginning ...

Hey there (: I see nothing wrong with this at all! So it needn't much reviewing, I will say that this was certainly an interesting topic to write on for ...

Wow. and this, this my dear, is why I am following you hahaha xD This was beautiful and heartfelt, like all of your soul spilled on the paper along with ...

Hey there! You're wrong, I don't think this is as bad as you may have interpreted, I quite liked it really (: The only thing I have to say is... ...

Hey ajt! (: I'd like to begin by saying that this is full of heart and emotions, and that's something every writer desperately wants to show up on the paper ...

Hey remember (: Insanity here! The topic for this poem was very original, and well portrayed. I must say when I read it, it sounded more like a rap in ...

Hey Dream! Insanity here, I loved your poem! It was beautifully written and the imagery made it so easy to picture it in my mind, definitely a good piece you've ...

Hey there Zombie! Insanity here with your review (: My gas mask brother is turning away, I am sinking into nightmares again. The dead pull my shell away I'm not ...

Hey there mistie! Insanity here with your review (: I really liked this poem, there weren't any real metaphors, but you don't always needs those. I loved this line... don’t ...

Hey there twit! Insanity here to review this lovely poem (; The idea is very cute and sparked my interest. Writing a poem about a commonly used phrase, definitely something ...

This is the second comical piece I've reviewed today!~ hahahah this was hilarious, no other content necessary (: I wish more people would make pieces like this, sure a descriptive ...

The occasional pop of slowly burning wood added to the romance of the music. "Romantic vibe" or "Romantic essence" might add a little to that section (: Other than that, ...

Heya! insanity here to give you a review (: I'd like to start off by saying that the idea wasn't exactly something... new. It's been used, quite a bit. When ...

No other words possible, can describe what I have to say, besides a simple phrase. This last line was a little awkward and and I think maybe you should have ...

written down in poetry and prose my thoughts now permanent on lined paper Rather than 'written down', seeing as it's a commonly used phrase, I suggest using a synonym like ...