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SushiSashimi333

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch - Prologue

    Actually, I redid this chapter if you look in my portfolio you'll see the new version. Hopefully you like that one better! :D

    Feb 3, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch Chapter I (New)

    Hi! Thanks for the review! Yeah, I totally didn't notice that typo so I'm glad you pointed that out, I'll get on that right away. What did you think about ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch Chapter I (New)

    Hi! Thank you so much for the review! If you want, there is a prologue to this story that's been posted if you want to read that one. Chapter one ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]

    OMG side stories are so fun! Not to write, I've never written one myself, but they're fun to read :D

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]

    Whoa O_O I feel like you just opened a gate to a whole other world :O So these goddesses are the ones in your book right? (Just need to be ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Devil Touch Chapter I (New)

    That's always fun writing a first review :) I was wondering, what were your thoughts on the plot? Did you like the gore, or what's your image of Lilith, or ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]

    Hm, there has to be some way to tell the readers that though. Like, you can't exactly tell the readers that Jazai is non binary and then explain that, but ...

    Jan 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Balance - Chapter 1 [First Draft]

    Just wondering, is ce the official term? I've never heard that or thought about what you would call someone if they are genderless and if you didn't know their name. ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Proportion.

    I'm glad I could be of assistance! Sorry for skimming, but it was getting pretty late, and if I read in depth then the review would probably have taken me ...

    Dec 13, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: The Inch (Rewritten) - Chapter 1

    Oh yeah, I got notifs XD Yeah, I liked your work. I think if you expand this more it'll be really good, and procrastination runs my life so I know ...

    Nov 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: True Love's Kiss~A retelling of Beauty and the Beast

    I see. So are you going to do any little tweakings? Also, is there a Grimm version of the story?

    Jun 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Echolocation Chapter one; Discovery

    Yeah, I realized that after I posted this XD Then I kinda realized that I had just done a bit of reviewing and it was like, midnight XD I'll get ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Action / Adventure Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 2

    Yes, I admit first person is very hard to write in XD also, the best of luck in your imagery quest!

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: Carnation: The Assassin's Tears - Chapter 1

    Sure thing ^^

    May 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Removed

    OH!! Okay, I can see that now. Thanks for clearing that up ^^

    May 6, 2014


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