Sureal

Hi there, ScarlettFire So, I really like your premise. It feels (potentially) refreshing. I hope you manage to realise its potential. I also like the way you write, especially the ...

Hi Deanie, my name’s Sureal. I’m here to give you a review. Your opening is fantastic (and is actually the entire reason I read this) and the strong writing continues ...

Hi, ErikaHale. My name’s Sureal. I’m here to give you a review, which is always a good sign as I don't review stories I find boring. My first thought when ...

Hi Remy, I like the way you write. You have a very easy-to-read style that flows nicely. I also see a lot of potential in your writing, so long as ...

Hi, @abdkirill I enjoyed this. The title attracted me and the story kept me reading throughout. I liked your characterisation and the social-satire running through the piece. Having said that, ...

Another strong entry for your novel. (Does the novel have a name, by the way?) Before I try to write up a review of my own, I had a quick ...

Hi there. I like this. It reminds me very much of Edgar Allen Poe's short story 'William Wilson.' ( If you're interested, here's a link to its Wikipedia page , ...

I think this might be a missed opportunity to really go crazy and experiment with your writing. Rather than just saying 'I can't sleep' and 'ADD sucks,' you could have ...

In terms of framing an argument (or 'proof' as you put in), I think your main weakness is in your final point, re. the resurrection. And as your argument that ...

This is really good, so I'm going to have to go with a nit-picky review. I hope you don't mind. -> "shaded by the blanket which hid the rest of ...

I don't normally review poetry as it's not really my thing; I'm much more a prose guy. However, with all the controversy and strong feelings this is causing, I'm going ...

Just throwing a few opinions your way: -> This reads like something I would have written. In fact, the first half is almost moment-for-moment identical to a story I wrote ...

Hi there, Bol. Just dropping by to drop some opinions. -> I'm going to have to disagree with the other reviewers so far, and say I wasn't a massive fan ...

Thoughts: -> The fragmented writing style works well. Makes the story immediately stand out, and mirrors the fragmented mind of the character. -> Watch out for cliched phrases. 'Hung lazily ...

Hi there McSlothington! Always good to see someone getting into humour writing. It's a difficult genre to get right, but a very satisfying one to write when you do manage ...