Sunshine

Haha, I liked this! It was a lot nicer than the sobbing, but your still gone poetry. It had a decent flow for the most part, but I disagree with ...

Note: Love your avvie! Katherine Hepburn's pretty cool. Wow. This had a very lingering effect on me. Unlike Lele, I do have blue eyes and officially feel special. :) I ...

Hey Brooklyn! Had some extra time an decided to come review this! The way you began this was good, but it didn't seem to connect to the last chapter. (I ...

Here by request! You thought this was bad? I was honestly expected: "The dog ran, Fast, Fast. The cat went, Hiss, Hiss." Instead, I got a very deep and senseful ...

Hey cuz! My corrections (and nitpicky personal things to) are as follows: 1.) You have a few spacing issues.It's an easy fix, and a bugger for reviewers and readers. If ...

Hey you asked me for a review and I decided it would just be best to start here and go through the rest. I enjoyed this piece and the only ...

Yea, next chapter! *Does a strange dance.* Anyway, there are a few typos the Ranger missed that are bugging me. Since I need to get them from my system so...: ...

I love Warriors! I have a couple of fixes that need to be made. The major thing that links to all other fixes is how short this piece is. There ...

So this is your plan, eh? Ask me to review a piece that already has a bunch of reviews on it? Haha, just teasing. I liked this a lot! You ...

*Pumps fist!* I'm first! This really is getting great friction! There aren't any grammar or spelling mistakes but there are a few things that need fixing. In two cases: Athena ...

*Sighs* I finally caught up! I think this is incredibly interesting and my love of Greek myths will attach me to both of your sides. I love the idea you ...

Hi! I liked this a lot. Sometimes you write best when your angry. Since the last reviewer covered your chronological order I'm going to cover something else that bothered me. ...

You are such a mad genius Skins. Did you know that? Mad. Genius. My guess is you might want to know my favorite line? Too bad if you don't cause ...

My goodness that was long!! Ok, I'll admit that I don't know that much about scrolls but I can try to help. It's always good to get an outside opinion, ...

Hi, lovestowrite! I'm crafty and I'll be your reviewer for today! I'm afraid I didn't catch the first draft of this story, but the title caught my attention so viola! ...