Sunshine

Hi there, Sunshine here to review today! The words were very well-chosen, and flowed well together; the intial idea of the poem has been accomplished, and that's great. However, the ...

Alrighty-then, Sunshine here to review. This felt very artful, very poetic- the sort of work where every word seems so thought out, so purposeful you almost don't know what to ...

It's such a shame nobody has reviewed this yet. This is seriously gorgeous. It has a bit of a poetic rhythm, and like some of the poems from the great ...

It's been so long since I reviewed, but I saw your status complainng about the need for a quality review- and so I decided to try. It was just so... ...

That was... depressing. I guess that was the point, though. So...good job? I'm here to be of service to you on this lovely review day! My first suggestion would be ...

*Applauds* Very, very well written. I often hate and love to review poetry, as it is such a free verse and interpertation- even more so than short stories. So, if ...

Hey, I'm Sunshine and I'll be (whether you feel like you deserve one or not) your reviewer today. My first comment is: good for you! You found a subject that ...

Hey! I loved the emotion flowing from this piece. You got deep into Daniel's head, and it was great. You can tell, as Smylin said, the similarity between the two ...

Hello! First thing I have to say is just: woah. Spacing is WAY off in this story. I literally read the first 'paragraph' and stopped because my eyes hurt from ...

The word's are beautiful, the tone is beautiful, the set up is perfection. What else if there to say? Ah, yes. I'm not exactly sure what this is. I realize ...

Hey there Drama! I liked this poem! Although some of it confuses me, the parts I do understand are beautifully written. There is a drive behind this poem and you ...

Hey cuz! Happy review day! Woah. That was so dark. I normally don't read that stuff, but for you I did. ;) This poem is very short, as those before ...

Hello and happy review day! My first thought after finishing this piece was: Did I just read a poem? I realize that lyrics are supposed to resemble poetry, but I ...

Hi! I really like your story in terms of description and charecterization. Wonderful! However, if I were you I'd change the title. Ashfur's death was a huge deal and someone ...

Hey! My name is Sunshine and I'll be your reviewer today! I think I'll get the nit-picky stuff out of the way and then I'll move on to my overall ...