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Re: Game On Level 0.1
Hello there! I hope you're having a nice day! Wow! I love this! It's so interesting and awesome and...wow! I love her voice, it's so strong and determined! The way ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Storyteller's Reality Chapter 1
Hello! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! First, this is a very interesting concept. It's different. So that's a tick! However, the main thing that gets to me is ...
May 23, 2014 -
Re: Silver Soul: Chapter One
Hello! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! \(^O^)/ I must say, this is pretty good! I like the idea, the voice and every little detail! It was like a ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: What's true. Chapter one
Hi! *waves frantically at you* The name is Sarah and I'm here to review! Okay, it's interesting. You see these stories around a lot, but it's very interesting! Problems... ""GOD ...
Apr 14, 2014 -
Re: Shamasa’s Life
Hey there! How are you? Okay, so I can relate to this. I always get bullied and this is a common thing for me. Nice job. The voice was strong ...
Mar 10, 2014 -
Re: Emotions and Irony
Hello! My God...That was chilling. The way it was written, especially the happy thoughts, gave me metal images. Disturbing mental images. Kind of like when I read Carrie. *laughs* Anyway, ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Saving Lost Hearts (Inspired By Savior by Rise Against)
Hey! Well, I really love romances. This one was really cute. Both characters people can easily relate to. I love that! Okay, the first paragraph is really overwhelming to read. ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Mirror Man
Hey! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! The thing about this piece is that it doesn't seem like a short story. To me, it's more like a poem of ...
Feb 6, 2014 -
Re: Blurred lenses
G'Day! How's your life been? Alright, this is so beautiful in my opinion! I love the tone and the story! The descriptions were just amazing! They painted a picture in ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Coffee, Grit, and my Dad's Best Shoes 1.2
What's new in your world? Okay, so I thought this was incredibly cute! I love the way the two connect! Like two peas in a pod! *happy sigh* Such a ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Kyteline, Chapter One: Part Two
Hey! Well, this was a gripping read! I never once got bored! Also, this is such a well written story! It flows nicely and the way it was told is ...
Dec 29, 2013 -
Re: Bow & Arrow: Chapter One
Good day to you! I'm here to review! Well, it seems that you may be a Ranger Apprentice fan or you have a liking to these kind of things. I ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: When the Sun Shines
Hey! Wow, this was very different from what I read. I like it. It has a certain flow in it that just grabs your attention! I love the main character ...
Dec 7, 2013 -
Re: A work in Progress
Hello! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! WHOA, SOME STORY! I love these kinds of stories, full of fantasy and wonder! The main character was really well thought out ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: The Brain Collector
Hey! I'm Sarah and I'm here to review! This was a little different then what I had in mind. It's a good thing though! You should always keep your reader ...
Nov 14, 2013
