Sunnyanddinostomp

Hello, I quite enjoyed this short story, even though I'm not a big fan of romantic pieces of writing. I kind of guessed that the woman was going to die, ...

Although this is short, it is really powerful and enables you to really think about it. It isn't full of unnecessary information and really gets straight to the point, which ...

Great poem! It really captures the rush of when you need to do something quickly. I've been in this situation many times and this is exactly how I was feeling. ...

I really enjoyed reading this story. At first I was a bit confused as to who the characters were but this made me want to read on and discover more, ...

This is great! I really love this first chapter and it really makes me want to read on. I was quite disappointed when I found that it was the end ...

well that character changed quickly. Although this is rather disturbing, I do like it. It's very gruesome and uses extremely good imagery. I really liked the way that the main ...

wow. This is amazing. It was really chilling and creepy. I loved how halfway through you thought the characters were safe but then they went to Eli's house and the ...

Hi I really love this poem, it just seems so pure and perfect, how you describe the all colours. In the second line did you mean "We wonder why your ...

Hi, This is really good, and I think that the second person viewpoint works really well. I especially like the line, "Maybe if you hold him tightly enough his pieces ...

hi. I really love this poem and how it is taken from the point of view of both the mother and the child.(I think) I just wondered, is the second ...

I really like this and I like that it's meant to be confusing because that's what I try to make my stories like. I feel like it sort of makes ...

I really like this poem. I think that the rhyming pattern is really effective and I liked the imagery used. I especially liked lines eight and nine, as well as ...