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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Preacher's Wife

    Not a review, btw. I just wanted to say I really liked this--if I had a favorite list, this would probably be up there with the best. Great work.

    Jan 30, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: XY

    I have just came back from my own mini excursion, and I've been greeted with many wonderful Christmas gifts (even though I myself do not celebrate Christmas, unfortunately). I think ...

    Dec 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Lesser of Two Evils

    Start with more development of the Marquise. Give the Marquise a close servant friend of Doyle's, perhaps, and have the friend tell all the horrendous things the Marquise is known ...

    Dec 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Ashes of Eden

    Thank you for the review. Personally, I don't see Louie as a pyromaniac--in fact, I honestly don't think she's burnt any churches down. She's just an individual looking for god ...

    Dec 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: The Many Things You Cannot Reach (TIG 1)

    Thank you for the review!

    Dec 15, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Together

    Yeah, that's why I put the warning up there. I had an idea and went with it, but realized the development was just a mess. Thanks for the review.

    Dec 15, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: The Friendzone

    Haha, yeah. I find most love stories drab and boring, but I do find the concept of the friend zone interesting--it really does prove the motivations for some of these ...

    Dec 13, 2015
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Black Holes

    Thank you for reviewing (strange thing is that your review looks longer than the actual work). Also, I know it's awkward, but Kafka is not my character--it's Franz Kafka, the ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: All The False Hope

    I won't be doing a review as it's self-explanatory. For now, I'd like to say that I hope you achieve your precious victory--everybody deserves to.

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: The Friendzone

    Since I really don't know how to review an article, I'll instead comment my opinions on the matter (if you don't mind; if you do, run as fast as you ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Kite Runner Book review

    Hey, back again. Seeing as you've already got your fair share of reviews, I'll keep it short: loved it, want to see more from you. Though I do suggest working ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Kite Runner Book review

    When you hear bae's name in a review. I am definitely going to read this later.

    Dec 10, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: XY

    I'm not sure if that's a compliment or an insult, but alright. Don't worry, one day I'll make something bad enough that it will force me into a coffin, and ...

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Abandoned

    Eh, fiction isn't anybody's strong point--some people just translate emotions better than others, somehow. Art's always subjective. And though I haven't read most of your works, I wouldn't say your ...

    Dec 8, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: XY

    Also, the suicide as more than just a plot device is genius. I don't understand how I missed it.

    Dec 8, 2015


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