Sujana

Aw hell yeah, a work about the Night Witches. Why haven't I picked this up earlier? Some mistakes I found that you might want to address later on: -"Had just ...

Before I start this review, I'd like to say that I have a couple of suggestions for a title in mind (most of them outrageous but some ordinary): -"It's Like ...

Oh good Lord, that was sad. Why hasn't anyone reviewed this? I'm so sorry I took so long to review this, love. I'll try to remedy the situation. Some annoying ...

Hello, fellow Team Batman! (nanananana) Here for a short review. I'm surprised this hasn't gotten a review, since it's so short. But regardless, I thought that this was a good ...

Hello. I might as well come here, of course, since my last review of the third chapter. See, some may argue that the third chapter is better than this one, ...

Hello. This was somewhat strange to read, as it seems like you're (or the character's--it could just be your character) is pouring out a lot of emotion on the paper. ...

Chapter One: You’ll hear from everyone in the universe who knows anything about writing repeating the same phrase monosyllabically, like the zombies of old B movies—show, don’t tell. I assure ...

Fortunately, I only found one noticeable mistake here. Mostly because I'm not a grammar nut, but well done anyway: -"If that was not the case, then apple’s technology won’t only ...

I have only a couple of minor complaints in the text (as I'm not one to look too deeply into grammatical manners), and for the most part you've excelled at ...

This was...actually pretty good. Even better than the last story I read from you, I think. It's not unreviewably good, but I'd just like to say that despite my minor ...

I've always known that you were a religious person whose always open to new beliefs, and I sort of expected this ending. However, to get this out of the Green ...

You have been given the privilege of being one of the few works that I don't need to proofread, and for that I'm very grateful. Now, onto the review. I'll ...

A Short Note: Just a technical issue, but you may have accidentally put a space inside a dialogue around this point: “Ken’s a nice fellow . Yes, he brought me ...

-"For months him endured" For months he endured -"This did not deter the bears one but." This did not deter the bears one bit -"It seems that they got ahold ...

Some Notable Errors I Think You Might Want to Think About: -"Then,a I would quickly unlatch the hinge, slip out of the crate, and head outside." Delete the 'a'. -"Then ...