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Re: Coins (title to change)
An intriguing story. I liked the tone of it overall, and everything seemed strangely serene, even though the reader immediately picks up after they read about the woman asking for ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: An experiment in what people will enjoy reading
An interesting piece of work, certainly. I'm interested to see how this experiment turns out, but for the most part the protagonist seems to be bright and silly enough to ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Silky Ink
I feel like there's an interesting story behind your evident yet intriguing obsession over shearing heads. This is not a bad thing, mind you, as it makes a lot of ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: Inner Beauty - Chapter 1.2
Well, the ball is going accordingly. There's some interesting things going on about here, but so far what I've said in the last review still stands. Before I start reviewing ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: 6. Tall Tales
Hey Soul! It's me again, just to check in and try to review this for a little while, so without further ado... -"I found it mighty odd that someone would ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: Inner Beauty - Chapter 1.1
I'll be honest with you, since you said that that's what you preferred from me (or at least implied); this start is simply...okay. It is the most okay start to ...
Apr 14, 2016 -
Re: 5. Not Permitted
Hey, Soul! What an interesting chapter. I liked the ending in particular, it seems like we're finally getting a character with some dimensions to them. It's odd that I haven't ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: j - 3
Good morrow, Liz. Just working my night shift here, if you don't mind. I will start with saying that this is a somewhat confusing but simultaneously fun little chapter, that ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: Zu part 2
Me reading the "It was sensitive toward the sunlight" line: Wait. Is he... an albino ? Now, onto the actual review that isn't filled with nonsensical craziness that most people ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: What If
What a lovely little poem. I'll try to be gentle on it, as it seems very benign in its nature, but I remain my critical ways as always. Firstly, the ...
Apr 13, 2016 -
Re: j - 2
I'm not sure if you took my advice on having the bears and other animals be the focus or if you were just feeling like having long, dragged out conversations ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Zu
What a quaint little story. I'll be looking forward to reviewing the rest of this, but beforehand, I need a short review here so that I can sum up my ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: j - 1
Look! No major grammatical errors! *confetti party* Sorry I got to this relatively late, considering who else has come to the party. But just from reading this, I'm starting to ...
Apr 12, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
This can only lead to intriguing places. Before I start this review, however, I'd like to point some of these out: -"One of the nights where anything dark and evil ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Faye Summers Ch 1: The One With the Broken Window
Intriguing! Definitely an interesting looking book, from the ending of this chapter. The beginning was, of course, a bit iffy, but the ending solved that for me to some extent. ...
Apr 11, 2016
