Sujana

And two new characters come trotting in. They seem very interesting, and are obviously a show of the other talons in this world. I like how you don't tell us ...

I think I'm seeing what you really do best--adventure scenes. You really excel at this sort of thing, because everything I've read so far suggests you know how to suck ...

Okay, I've made a mistake. I thought the howler dragons just gave them the things and told them "send it to those dudes", which I admit is a mess on ...

Well, I guess that ends my hopes for Hisster being anything bigger than a bully character for now. Though I still stand on what I said in the last chapter. ...

I think it's at this point that my hope spot is clicking a bit. While the mistakes in your prose are growing by the number, your characterization and story are ...

Hi, love. While I understand your feelings at this point, this really is more of a blog post than something that can be reviewed, so I don't know how to ...

This is very difficult to review because, unlike other works, it seems to refuse to be reviewed. It's the artist's beast, and to put some sort of order into it ...

Hey there, love. I'm sorry I haven't read the rest of this book, but now that I've read this chapter, I'm actually quite intrigued to read the rest of it. ...

Hahaha. That was a great way to end a chapter. I remember reading this book a while back, and I'm surprised this chapter in particular is still in the green ...

Ever since I first read it at sixth grade, I always wanted to hear somebody go on some sort of tangent on the meaning behind the book. The Little Prince ...

This was a story with a very interesting premise, though I did wish it was executed better than it was. Though I haven't seen the rest of the book, I ...

1200 words from page 181 of ma book Hahahahahaha. I'm sorry, I just love that title. In any case, I'd suggest you change it to something more conventional, but I ...

I feel like this work has a lot of meaning to it (and it definitely does), but I'm not sure if the author intended something specifically for it or if ...

As an individual who hasn't watched the Doctor Who series at its whole, I have no idea how accurate this story is to the canon, so I'll probably end up ...

Hey there Dogsrule. Here's another pessimist hollering at your door, but this time on a more optimistic note. Firstly, let's point out all the grammatical and spelling errors on this ...